I'm writing a story... I had the idea of writing it a year ago but I haven't done it until now... I think that my story will be very long.... I hope you like it!


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Chapter 2
Susie decided that it was a good idea to visit Ly before going to bed so he will feel as if he is part of the family. She first knocked the door, but after no response she decided to open it.
The room was dark and cold. She turned on the lights and got impressed of what she saw. There was blood everywhere!!! She couldn't realize what had just happened there. When she saw Ly drop in a small and dark corner of the room, half awake with his black hair over his face, with cuts in his wrists and surrounded by blood she wanted to scream but she couldn't. She grabbed Ly very carefully in her


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Chapter 1
It was midnight and Susie was planning to go to bed. But first she was going to give a kiss to each of her kids. She went to Danie's room and saw her little girl sleeping so peaceful that she knew that she was having happy dreams. Susie kissed her daughter in the head and walked outside the door very carefully. Then she went to Dwayne's room and noticed all the mess. She smiled when she saw her son sleeping without a worry on his bed that was at one side of the messy room. She kissed him and went out of the room silently. She walked toward the door that connected Ly's house to hers and stopp
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StaircaseShe fainted again behind the staircase started falling she grabbed the edge of a stair squzeeing her eyes shut clenching her teeth the world still spun the back of her eyes hurt she saw him in the road bleeding she saw herself screaming Don't go... Don't go... she felt her fingers first on his deadening pulse then the sting of them slipping across the grooved wood the wood dug into her skin her fingers let go her arms flailed wildly as she tried to steady herself and at the same time wipe away the horrible memory her fingers bledStaircase
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"I HAVE FURY!"
"I thought Templars were old dudes with funny hats who sat around drinking beer and plotting world domination with like... Lizard People."
- Desmond Miles
I'm flattered that you like my work! *blushes*
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